Midnight Snack by Chloe Maine
He was my first crush. But he was my dad’s best friend, so he pushed me away…
Now I’ve done what he told me to do. I went and lived my life. I still know what I want (and it’s him, no question), so I’m showing up on his doorstep late at night, knowing he won’t turn me away. I may only have one night to convince him that we both need to test the wild chemistry between us. So I’m going to make myself the most irresistible, secret midnight snack he’s ever been offered. And I’ll have to hope that once he has a taste, he won’t be able to let me go again.
- File Name:midnight-snack-by-chloe-maine.epub
- Original Title:Midnight Snack (Dad's Best Friend)
- Creator:Chloe Maine
- Language:en
- Identifier:uuid:593f331d-003a-4fbc-bd43-c2961c5cb7af
- Date:2023-06-19T18:30:00+00:00
- File Size:222.793 KB
Table of Content
- 1. Title Page
- 2. Contents
- 3. Copyright
- 4. About This Book
- 5. 1. Eden
- 6. 2. Nolan
- 7. 3. Eden
- 8. 4. Nolan
- 9. 5. Eden
- 10. 6. Nolan
- 11. 7. Eden
- 12. 8. Nolan
- 13. 9. Eden
- 14. 10. Nolan
- 15. 11. Eden
- 16. Epilogue. Nolan
- 17. An Excerpt from Father of the Bride
- 18. Also by Chloe Maine
- 19. About the Author
This story was a bit different than most other "daddy/lg" short stories. While there wasn't much to it, the two main characters didn't act on their feelings the instant the FMC turned 18. In fact, the MMC rejected her and told her to go live her life to the fullest. So...she did. For four long years, during which time she kept her V-card and he remained celibate. But four years later? He was 49 and she was 22. She turned up at his home, and all bets were off, even though he was determined to continue pushing her away. There was the normal angst and drama, though very lowkey, as well as the usual push/pull between the two main characters. But that was pretty much it. There wasn't a lot of plot going on, and there weren't any other secondary characters to interfere. Even the FMC's parents weren't involved. From start to finish, it was just the two of them, and it took place in less than 24 hours. Other than a slight recount of what happened on the FMC's 18th birthday, there wasn't any history, and there wasn't any backstory regarding the characters. It felt like a "wham, bam, thank you, Ma'am" type novella written only to help the reader get a bit titillated...and that does happen, but it's so mild that, eh, well, it was mild. Let's leave it at that, shall we? It was worthy of maybe a one-star rating, but that's about all. It wasn't a bad story, and I didn't have an issue with the age gap or anything that occurred in the book. It just fell flat and it felt incomplete and rushed.