Can’t Fake Twins by Mia Mara

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Can’t Fake Twins by Mia Mara
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The deal with Katie Martin was simple.
Play my fake girlfriend at my younger brother’s wedding.
She’s his ex.
But now for a whole weekend, she’s mine…

She calls me her silver fox.
I call her my bambi who needs saving… from me.
She’s not just another conquest.
My son adores her.
Her sunshine thaws the coldest of hearts.
I’ll never forgive my brother for what he did to her.
I want to keep her safe, between my penthouse sheets.
But I don’t do real relationships.
And now my plan has just one flaw…
There’s nothing fake about our twins growing inside her.

  • File Name:cant-fake-twins-by-mia-mara.epub
  • Original Title:Can't Fake Twins: A Silver Fox Fake Date Romance (Single Dad Billionaires)
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  • Language:en
  • Identifier:MOBI-ASIN:B0CSWRG1CY
  • Date:2024-02-05T00:00:00+00:00
  • File Size:3.633 MB

Table of Content

  • 1. Title Page
  • 2. Copyright
  • 3. Description
  • 4. Contents
  • 5. 1. Katie
  • 6. 2. Katie
  • 7. 3. Adam
  • 8. 4. Katie
  • 9. 5. Adam
  • 10. 6. Katie
  • 11. 7. Adam
  • 12. 8. Katie
  • 13. 9. Adam
  • 14. 10. Katie
  • 15. 11. Adam
  • 16. 12. Katie
  • 17. 13. Adam
  • 18. 14. Katie
  • 19. 15. Katie
  • 20. 16. Adam
  • 21. 17. Katie
  • 22. 18. Katie
  • 23. 19. Adam
  • 24. 20. Katie
  • 25. 21. Katie
  • 26. 22. Adam
  • 27. 23. Katie
  • 28. 24. Adam
  • 29. 25. Katie
  • 30. 26. Adam
  • 31. 27. Adam
  • 32. 28. Katie
  • 33. 29. Adam
  • 34. 30. Epilogue
  • 35. Hate to Burn: An Enemies to Lovers Close Proximity Romance
  • 36. Sneak Peek

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Kiley O
Kiley O

Can't Fake Twins, part of the Single Dad Billionaires series was about Katie Martin, an elementary school teacher, and Adam Lanphier, the owner of Lanphier Airlines. (The author didn't provide the ages of either character. All the reader knew was that Katie was a teacher, so she was in her mid-twenties, and Adam, the oldest of the two brothers, was a "silver fox", which would put him in his late thirties to early forties.)

Katie had been dating Adam's brother for several months when he took her to meet his family for the first time. Toby had never gotten along with his brother and told Katie many bad things about him, thus planting distrust in her before she met him. However, their first meeting stuck with them. A year after they had been dating, Katie returned home early from school one day and caught Tobie having sex with her BFF. She broke it off immediately.

Two years later, Katie was drinking with her friends at a bar when she ran into Adam again. After they talked for a bit, Adam informed her that his brother was getting married to her former BFF whom he'd cheated on her with, and he asked if she would be his date for the wedding. He said it would be their revenge against the couple. While she left the bar without giving him an answer, she eventually agreed. It was while they were at the wedding that things got intimate between the two, but then he left her without a word the following morning.

This story had so much angst and drama that it made this reader's head spin as if watching a tennis match. The emotional rollercoaster was in full swing with so many twists and turns it was nauseating. Neither of the main characters could make up their mind about their feelings for the other, although Katie was the first to admit her feelings, at least to herself. Adam took much too long to admit how he felt about Katie. He was more wishy-washy and afraid to commit to her.

Although both characters were fully developed, they both left a lot to be desired. While it was understandable that Katie had trust issues because of how her ex treated her in the past, she treated Adam poorly because of it. But Adam was no better. While he later stated that he had fallen in love with her at first sight, he treated her like crap for 90% of the story. It wasn't until something happened to her that he finally owned up to his feelings. They both had a lot of growing up to do, but the author never allowed them to do it on a page. The reader had to accept them for what they were, but even that wasn't good enough.

There was so much going on during this book that it felt like the author used it as an information dump. But it was a good story. It was just very repetitive and it had a lot of grammatical and punctuation errors that douse the story quite a bit.

It was a good story. It just needed more editing and tweaking to be a better book. Because of that, I couldn't give it more than a three-star rating. It just didn't earn it.

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